Wednesday, February 29, 2012

Three Essentials for Writing a Perfect Food Blog Post -- Lessons from A Homemade Life by Molly Wizenberg


Reading A Homemade Life by Molly Wizenberg is a writing course for food bloggers. Her book grew out of her popular and long-running blog Orangette. The book tells the story of her life through vignettes and recipes. It was our Kitchen Reader choice for February, chosen by Jules of Stone Soup.

Wizenberg's voice is chatty, friendly, and laid back. She paints word pictures of her family and friends in a humourous and loving way. She has been a food blogger since 2004. In her book she says that she writes "about my life some, too, since it intersects with food roughly three times a day." It's clear that this book grew from the stories on her blog. Each of the forty-five short chapters in her book is a perfect model of how to write an engaging blog post. I learned three lessons to apply to my food blogging. I'm considering these the three essential ingredients for a perfect food blog post.


Length
The vast majority of the chapters are exactly three pages long, plus a recipe. Almost exactly 1200 words, to a one. I imagine this is a bit longer than I could write regularly in a blog post. But Wizenberg is very consistent and from this I see that I should be more consistent, too.

Topic
Every one of these chapters tells a personal story. Often they concern the recipe that follows quite closely. Other times they tie into the recipe more loosely. But each of them is more about life than about the food, in my opinion. This is something I should learn how to do more. Wizenberg writes, "I don't think many of us are terribly interested in recipes that have no stories or real-life context."

Structure
Many of the chapters follow a common structure. This structure makes writing the chapter simple. I imagine that if I were Wizenberg, I would have planned these chapters in the reverse order to that in which I wrote them.

For example, one chapter finishes with a recipe for white chocolate dessert. This was an eighties fad dessert. Other eighties fads were aerobics (which Wizenberg's mother loved), shoulder pads (which her mother wore), mullets, and crimped hair. The chapter starts with the fads that were less personal to Wizenberg (the crimped hair and the mullets). She discusses the eighties in general. Then she proceeds to talk about her mother's shoulder pads for one paragraph. Then she tells some stories over several paragraphs about her mother's aerobics. She finishes by linking to her mother's cooking of the eighties fad, white chocolate dessert.

This structure is repeated dozens of times: from a general idea, to a personal connection, to a recipe that links both. This is an easy way, I now see, to plan and write a blog post.

Writing the perfect blog post is like making bouchons au thon. Following Wizenberg's step-by-step recipe for French tuna patties has reminded me that learning to write blog posts is also about getting the essential ingredients correct.

What do you think? What are the essential ingredients of a great food blog post?



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Wow, Sarah, I love how you distilled Molly's chapters down to three ingredients for a great food blog post (and here I was, too busy drooling over the book itself!). I would have said that a photo was an "essential" to a great food blog post, but I was never left starving for a visual while reading "A Homemade Life", so I guess, with the right words, a thousand words is more than worth a picture!
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Victoria, that's a good point about a photo. I didn't even think of that. But usually I do think a photo is essential for me. But when I visited Orangette I thought the photos were pretty good but not amazing. So that gives me hope. :)
I love how you took what you loved about her stories and plan to apply them to a blog post. All your points are spot-on, too!
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I LOVE that you were able to dissect this book and figure out the formula. For me, what makes a really good blog post is the writer's ability to connect the reader with what they're reading about. :) Rare is the frequency in which I save a recipe when I know nothing about how it came together.

Thank you for the roundup!

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Formulae are my friends, Kim. :) I'm a maths teacher.

Yes, I think you have picked out something I want to work on: connecting with readers, not just providing recipes.
Sarah, you always write the best, most creative reviews. :)

I will keep these lessons in mind anytime I write blog posts about food (which is becoming more & more rare lately...)!
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Great review Sarah!
I knew she was a brilliant writer but hadn't thought to link it to the structure... love it. And thanks for making me see that. And I did love that Molly was defending mullets.. really had me there.
I agree, sharing something of yourself and connecting with your readers is super important and really make the difference between a boring blog post and a great one. We're all about the stories
Hi Sarah. I've just moved to Hong Kong and while I was a food blogger in London, its really nice to connect with local food bloggers in Asia. It is an Interesting and thought provoking post . I've still to get my hands on Molly's book. It sounds like it is worth a read. I think if you can bring something original that can "hook" the reader then you are off to a great start. I also think if a blog post is honestly written then it inspires confidence in the audience.
I love the direction you took with this review - very helpful for us all! I did notice that Homemade Life was extremely easy to digest (arrrrghh pun not intended) and the chapters might have been the shortest I've ever seen. I have been very haphazard in the writing of my blog, but after a couple years of just "doing my own thing," I'm feeling the desire to be more thoughtful and crafted in what I do. This gives me some great points to mull over :)
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Those are really simple but amaze, I want to do this one for my kids..
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I love how you took what you loved about her stories and plan to apply them to a blog post. All your points are spot-on, too!
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